Writing Group: A Roll of the Bones

Hello, soothsayers and scam artists!

We’ve all heard the expression “playing with fate”. What if we could take it in a more literal direction? Distill fate—perhaps even someone else’s—into something concrete, and then… actually play with it? We’re curious. That’s why…

This week’s prompt is:

 

A Roll of the Bones

 

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When you think about it, knucklebones is a weird game.

Before the advent of plastic, way back in the day, people used to play games of chance with bones from actual corpses. Maybe not human corpses, but still. It’s kinda morbid.

Far from a game of chance with dice that happen to be carved from bone, we want to look at the strangeness of this whole thing. Converting mortality, a literal memento mori… into nothing more than a game. Something children used to play after school.

So this time around, I want you to build a story around this concept. Think of fate, and think of how to disarm it. Play with it. Make it a toy for your protagonists to prance around and extract joy or power from.

To roll the bones isn’t to give up on death; it’s to tell death that you aren’t afraid.

Go forward, look inevitability in the face, and blow a big raspberry.

 

 

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85 responses to “Writing Group: A Roll of the Bones”

  1. […] Tale Foundry has been a really good thing for me. They’re keeping me on track and giving me a chance to delve into topics outside my usual exploration. This last week the prompt was “A Roll of the Bones” and so included here is the link to my submission. Remains […]

  2. A Roll of the Bones
    By Seidmadr Tales

    Jack lay collapsed in the apartment as dark blood spilled from his mouth onto the wood flooring. His eyes fixated on his hand as the knucklebones fell from its weakened grip, only to collect them and futilely try again.

    Four men in black formal jackets appeared between two bounces of the bones. One carried a bottle of wine. One held a cane. One had a glass of rum. The fourth stood peering through the lens-less frames of his glasses at the newspaper clippings pinned to Jack’s wall.

    “My my my, haven’t we been a little hero,” the Baron commented, “and we’ve enjoyed watching you.” Jack let out a scratchy cough, that the Baron interpreted as a response. “You? No,” the Baron turned to Jack, shaking his head. “We’re not here for you.”

    Jack rolled his head back and forth on the floor as tears fell from his cheek as Jack endured the pain of forcing his words out. “No. Why don’t the dice work anymore?”

    The Baron stepped over Jack’s limp body to accept the glass of rum from his associate. “You must bet part of your life to gamble, but you’re dead broke. And there ain’t anything I can do about that.” He raised the glass and toasted Jack’s wall of achievements, “Instead of hoarding the winnings, you’ve spread them around the table. For that, I offer you this drink.”

    Jack felt the edge of the rum glass being pressed against his lips. His hand lay open displaying the sheep bones in his open palm as his body relaxed in surrender. Warm cigar flavored liquid splashed on his tongue, taking Jack back to the hot sands of last year’s vacation, when his ears registered the sound of bones tumbling on the floor followed by a solid thud.

    His eyes shot open to find his room empty except for his mother now faced down on the floor. The pair of sheep bones cast beside her hand. A laugh echoed in his head reminding him, “We weren’t here for you. But do try to avoid temptation for a year.”

    1. Speckled Avatar
      Speckled

      I really enjoyed the story, but couldn’t tell completely what was happening, but in a way I like that because it nakes the whole story more mysterious. I think he was dying but these “collecters of depts”, be they grim reapers or just dramatic representations of mafia men, killed his mother in his stead? Not sure how much is metaphor and how much is literal, but that could be a strength. Makes me think of classic depictions of the devil (or in this case, devils), which I think is cool. Overall I like how little I understood, but I’m not sure if that’s what you were going for.

    2. MysteryElement Avatar
      MysteryElement

      If I am not mistaken, this is taken from a bit of voodoo inspired lore? Either that or The Cat Returns, but I’d roll my dice in favor of the first. I imagine the more subtle nuances of the piece would go unnoticed for those unfamiliar with the Baron, but there is only so much you can say is so many words, and in a way it inspires curiosity to look up what you are referring to. Either way, a very fun piece, good job.

      1. Right on the mark. These were the four Barons of death in voodoo/haitian lore. The 350 word-limit meant I had to choose between sign-posting or blatant info-dump. Though, three of the barons weren’t necessary for the story, 1) I like their numeric similarity to the four horsemen of the Apocalypse, 2) gives the reader the feel that there is more to world that the story is set in, with only the cost of a few words.

  3. Speckled Avatar
    Speckled

    Little Black Figures
    By Speckled

    Matt’s pale hand directed a beam of destruction across the subtle mound and it’s innocent inhabitants. Little forms scurried left and right, though whether in fear from the killing light or in determination to get work done regardless of any danger Matt did not know. He caught one under his beam, and watched it writhe and shrivel until it lay still and he moved on.

    “What’cha doin all the way out here, Matt?”

    “Burning ants.”

    “I thought that was something little kids did.”

    “A fella’s gotta find entertainment somewhere.”

    “Well we should go inside soon, weatherman says a storm’s coming, it passed over Dakota and Nebraska just to hit us.”

    “I’ll be there.”

    “Why did you pick that hill? There must be hundreds between here and the house.”

    “No reason.”

    1. Michael Case Avatar
      Michael Case

      I like how the storm is hinted at like Matt randomly going after ants. In a way it reminds my of a Chas Adams cartoon, where a person is tormenting one thing while in the background just deserts is coming for the tormenter. Very nice.

  4. Matthew (Handsome Johanson) Avatar
    Matthew (Handsome Johanson)

    A Role of Bones
    By Matthew (Handsome Johanson)

    “Order. Order!” shouted Lord Barnaby, the coordinator of the Council of Peeved Skeletons. As the rattles in the room began to die down, he gave a few careful knocks with his gavel on the makeshift podium.

    “Thank you.” Barnaby continued. “Ahem, It is time to cast the vote on proposition 27a: Should we recruit a new skeleton to help with maintenance?” Murmurs permeated the debate chamber, but all were in agreement. The proposition passed.

    After a week of advertising in the nearby spooky dungeons and towns, the Chief Officer of Recruitment, Harold, and Lord Barnaby set up an audition stage and called the candidates to the dungeon amphitheater.

    “Thank you for coming, everyone!” Harold said. “We will now be hearing you audition for the part of maintenance guy.” The assortment of armored skeletons jostled a bit, but eventually formed a rough line to the audition stage. The lights dimmed and a spotlight flickered on to illuminate the stage

    The first skeleton, clad in business professional armor, took the stage.

    “Uh, hi. I’m Randy.” He awkwardly blurted out after some silence. “I’ve run a carpentry business in Stoneford for 347 years, now. I mainly do-”

    “Cut!” Shouted Harold from the judges booth. “Thank you, that’s all we’ll need.” Randy waited with anticipation.

    “So, what do you think?” whispered Barnaby.

    “Eh, I just don’t think his heart was in it.” replied Harold.

    Lord Barnaby gave Harold a dirty look, then politely asked for the next applicant.

    After a long session of “interviews”, the talent hunters were left with nothing.

    “What are we going to do?” Barnaby lamented. “The council VOTED. We cannot obstruct the will of the council!”

    “I’m not sure, maybe we can ensl-”

    “Excuse me sirs?” cried out the voice of a young boy. “I’d like to audition for the part of maintenance skeleton”

    The two stared at the clearly human child and then at each other.

    “It would take a tremendous act of subterfuge,” Barnaby whispered to Harold. “but maybe we could pull it off?” Harold nodded and turned to the boy.

    “Ok. Show us what you got!”

    1. Speckled Avatar
      Speckled

      First of all I love the subversion of the word “Role” that clearly even some of the “auditioners” aren’t aware of. It builds a hilarious and easily understandable situation. Secondly I like the light tone and puns. They make for a fun read that stands out among the more serious entries. Lastly I enjoyed the quick characterization of the skeletons in general and their leaders. They sound so fun to be around. The one thing I’d change: Barnaby can’t give a dirty look, he’s a skeleton with no facial skin or muscles to “give looks” with.

  5. Michael Case Avatar
    Michael Case

    The roll of a bone
    By Michael

    “Thomas will be an investment banker that is good at business, but bad at life.”

    “William will be a building contractor that will live a long life but spends most of his life hospitalized.”

    Plop, a quiet drop of a sound occurs at the edge of a reflection pond.

    “Joshua will be … Joshua will be … where did Joshua’s vertebra go?” Kismet frantically searches around the floor then looks over at Mortem. “Skip it for now.”

    Chaos picks up another used vertebra, and files the name written on it off. This was not always the case; Chaos remembers a time when the Hydra would have a neck removed so its vertebrae could be a first named icon. Those were the times of heroes, gods, and stories worthy of myths and legends. Now all the magic has been used up in these old bones. People just sit around doing little heroics, well nothing of any real mention anyways. The hydra died centuries ago.

    “Cancer, wasn’t it …” Chaos spoke in a muddled voice, “didn’t the Hydra die from cancer?”

    Mortem nudged Kismet with a knowing nod. The two of them would sit for hours waiting for Chaos to get them more vertebra to use as icons for the people coming to life. Often, they would wonder if Chaos had lost his mind from all the tedious work he had been doing. These little outbursts of Chaos’ did not help in them wondering.

    Chaos stares at the two others knowing full well what they talked about from time to time, then Chaos lets out a laugh. “Ever wonder what would happen if you dropped an icon in the pool?”

    Far above the workshop of souls, a baby is born.

    “Hum, well this is weird.” the Doctor curiously spoke.

    “The baby is alright, isn’t he?” the father nervously inquired.

    The Doctor seemed relaxed; “The baby is fine. It is just that he has no umbilical cord.” the Doctor continued, “Do you have a name?”

    After thinking for a few minutes, the father says, “Joshua”

    1. Well done! The slight diversion tactic used was really well made. There are also some good questions readers can raise about the world, like could have happened to the icons of the heroes of legend that made them the way they are. This could also be used as a good starting point for a bigger story on Joshua. The story itself is quite open to a lot of possible angles of topics to create more stories upon. Great job!

      1. Michael Case Avatar
        Michael Case

        Isn’t that the rub though. The vertebrae have been used so many times that all the magic in the icons needed for people is lost. Anyone could have that vertebra from a ancient hero or god icon and never know it.

        Thank you for reading.

        1. Yup. What I meant was I’m curious why, say, Odin is smarter than Thor, or why Beowulf is particularly strong. I just had an idea where each neck of the Hydra yielded a different attribute like intelligence or strength, or something like that. Anyway, that’s just a little idea I had.

    2. VeryBoringName Avatar
      VeryBoringName

      I like the story, it’s always nice to see a more human side of Gods, and it’s a bit sad to see the three gods, just doing their work even though the world they used to know and like ( at least for Chaos ) had long passed away, though, I get a bit confused at the end, did Chaos drop a icon into the pool and Joshua is special or did he not?

      1. Michael Case Avatar
        Michael Case

        Chaos had only known that the vertebra/icon and didn’t say anything about it. It was Kismet that was being sloppy at his job, and lost the vertebra/icon. The result has Joshua being born free with no predetermined fate.

        Also thank you.

    3. King_Nix Avatar
      King_Nix

      I very much like the concept you’re playing with. It has a vibe of various trios from mythology associated with fate and death. The idea of such a trio falling into an almost mundane routine, with one being particularly put off by the whole situation, is an interesting story to tell. Perhaps Chaos himself cast Joshua’s icon into the pool, hoping to break the monotony. That, and Joshua is also my first name, so your story stuck out to me.
      Very good work!

    4. I really enjoyed this story, and felt a strong Greek mythology aspect to it. But I get a sense that they’re bored with creating humans, as the humans no longer lead entertaining lives. Then, why do they keep doing it. If it’s simply their job, then what’s in it for their boss?

  6. RainbowRayBubbles Avatar
    RainbowRayBubbles

    Remains
    by C.W. Spalding

    “Are those human remains?” Leila said. Her voice was muffled behind her hand. Dixie shifted her weight and nudged the skull with the toe of her shoe.

    “Do-on’t do that!” Leila whimpered. Her squeaky voice made Dixie jump so bad that she knocked the cranium clean off. It rolled out of sight.

    There was a splash.

    “Let’s get outta here. This was way less creepy five minutes ago.” Dixie tugged on Leila’s sleeve, guiding her out of the ravine; back towards the thrumming of cicadas and the call of who-cooks-for-you owls. They shivered in unison and Dixie adjusted her backpack.

    “L-Let’s get back to the camp,” Leila said. She took one stiff step and stopped, though. Dixie snatched her hand, leading her along.

    It couldn’t have been anything but human, Dixie thought. But the bones were clean, not a speck of flesh on ‘em.

    “I wonder what terrible fate they-”

    “D-Don’t talk a-a-about it,” Leila cut her off.

    “You gotta admit-”

    “Don’t. Talk. A-About. It.”

    Dixie sighed and tried to tune into the local rhythms of the buggies. Only wind. It was then that she realized the forest had gone unnaturally quiet. She let go of Leila’s hand to adjust her backpack.

    “We should have gotten back to the camp by now, right?” she asked.

    When there was no answer, she reached for Leila, but her hand found only air. So she turned.

    Leila was gone.

    Dixie’s heart was thrashing against her ribs so hard she felt sick. “Leila? That’s not funny, you hear me?”

    She couldn’t catch a glimpse of Leila’s magenta ponytail through the trees. She listened for footsteps or breathing. Perhaps she passed out from worry?

    A twig snapped.

    “Leila,” Dixie chuckled. “Would you please come out now?” She was sweating now and a glob of sweat swept around her cheek. It plinked on her knuckles.
    “Leila?”

    She caught sight of a lamplight and she bolted towards it, ignoring the sloshing of the stream behind her. The cicadas started up again and the breath tangled in her throat finally escaped.

    1. This is a really good piece. Its greatest strength, I feel, is the atmosphere. The transcribed stutter, along with the occasional inputs from the creepy surroundings do a really good job at creating a scary image. Also, the tension built in the end was great. Its left completely open and up to the reader’s imagination, adding to the unnerving atmosphere. Good job!

    2. This is really well written, but I personally wish that there was a bit more at the end. Did Leila disappear, or did Dixie? Clearly messing with the clean bones shifted something for the girls. I almost wish, if it was going to be open ended, it cut off the last paragraph to leave it even more open. Leaving Dixie alone with no obvious good way out. Might be a bit too dark for that kind of an ending, though.

    3. King_Nix Avatar
      King_Nix

      I like the feel of your story. It gives me similar vibes to a lot of stories about wendigos and skinwalkers. Lost in the woods, finding some spooky junk like human remains, then the lively surroundings of the woods go silent, and the real spooky shit kicks into high gear. Good show!

  7. WolfsbaneX Avatar
    WolfsbaneX

    “High Stakes” [Duplicate from Private Group]
    By Hemming Sebastian Bane

    In Laib-Farriage, next to the murky Cliam Sea, there was a tavern. Cheap alcohol, cheap rooms, but good customer service. Most clients came in, ordered a beer, and enjoyed their night. However, this night, three cloaked individuals came and wordlessly sat in the back corner.

    By the time the majority of the patrons were drunk, one figure took the cards from their pocket out and shuffled them. The cards caught one patron’s attention, a dryad. He got up from his seat and approached the table.

    “Deal me in,” he said.

    The dealer stopped shuffling. “Are you sure? We play some pretty high stakes games.”

    The young man scoffed. “High stakes, big winnings, I say.”

    “‘Tis not untrue,” replied the figure to the dealer’s right. “Let him play, Bryn!”

    The dealer, Bryn, let out a hefty sigh. “Fine, Raddie. He can play.”

    The figure, Raddie, fidgeted excitedly. “‘Tis wondrous! Thou shalt join us, young…”

    “Anthos,” the dryad replied. “I’d very much enjoy that, Miss Raddie, Miss Bryn.”

    He turned to the third. “Pardon me, but I don’t know your name.”

    “I am Mist.” The voice was soft, husky and feminine.

    “Miss Mist. A pleasure.” Anthos bowed.

    Bryn dealt out the cards slowly. “Anthos, are you familiar with Sprigs?”

    The dryad scoffed. “I’ve played Sprigs since I could walk! Tell the specifics and I will not lose.”

    Bryn huffed. “Very well. Oak trumps all. Wands are high, and Mistletoe is wild. Each of us plays for ourselves. Six card hand, maximum three draw.”

    Anthos smiled. “The Ancient Form? So be it. What is the first bet? Five tin? Ten?”

    “Thou jest!” Raddie said with a giggle. “Mist, loanst thou him fifty?”

    The dryad’s jaw dropped. “Fifty tin? What’re you doing in this place with fifty tin?”

    “Not fifty tin,” Mist replied, dropping a sack onto the table with a thud and a moan.

    Wait. Sacks don’t moan. Anthos reached forward into the sack and pulled out what seemed to be a coin. However, it wasn’t metal. It was bone.

    “You see, Mister Anthos,” Bryn said, her feathered wings unfurling. “We wager souls.”

    1. RainbowRayBubbles Avatar
      RainbowRayBubbles

      I loved the overall casualness of this piece right up until the very end and then WHAM it gets super intense super fast. My only beef is the use of archaic language buuuut that’s a personal thing. I don’t think it’s a big deal! Overall, great work, you’ve done amazing WolfbaneX

      1. WolfsbaneX Avatar
        WolfsbaneX

        Without giving much away, I used archaic language for a specific reason. Thanks for reading.

  8. Charles Funk Avatar
    Charles Funk

    Liar’s Dice
    By Charles Funk

    Five shivering souls huddled tightly around a dying fire. Besieged by Winter’s Wind. But it was hunger, not cold, that haunted them. Taunting them. Hollow eyes darted at one another warily. Black hands lingered deep in their coats.

    Velichko stopped these thoughts by snapping twigs. Snapping them all back to reality.

    “This time. We play for it.” Velichko’s left hand revealed ten knucklebones carved into dice.

    “Who’s that?” Konig asked.

    “Alexei.” Velichko answered. “Made them myself.”

    “Making himself useful again.” Danilov laughed.

    “No!” Oleg protested. “Not again!”

    “Y’got a better idea?” Georgy asked. “Either we starve. Or we eat you.”

    “What’s the game?” Oleg sighed. Defeated.

    “Liar’s Dice.” Velichko said. “We claim the dice’s numbers between ourselves. The stakes rises till someone lies.”

    “Who’ll play.” Georgy asks.

    “The die decides.” Velichko rolled one to the floor.

    The die chose Danilov.

    “The die decides who dies. Fitting.” Danilov laughed. “Who else is playing?”

    “I will.” Velichko answered.

    5 knucklebones rolled in their hands. Those same hands hid it from prying eyes on the floor. Danilov smiled after peeking his dice. Velichko’s face showed nothing.

    “Three-3’s” Danilov began. “Gambling man, Velichko?”

    “Four-3’s” Velichko gambled. “Policeman.”

    “Three-4’s. What brought you to this Gulag, Officer?”

    A crack appeared in Velichko’s stony demeanor.

    “You crooked then?” Danilov smiled.

    “No. I was one of the good ones. Five-6’s.”

    “Apparently not a good liar.” Danilov grinned.

    “You’re right.” Velichko sighed.

    The men held their breaths as both men showed their hands. This quickly turned to shock when Velichko’s dice revealed four-6’s to Danilov’s one-6. Five-6’s in total.

    “I’m a terrible liar.” Velichko said.

    “But an honest cop nonetheless.” Danilov shrugged.

    “I’m sorry, comrade.” Velichko offered a hand.

    “Don’t be.” Danilov took it and kissed him in the cheek. “A fair game. Fairer than life ever was for me.”

    The others stood up baring steel but Danilov waved them off.

    “I was born a gentleman, comrades. I die proud as one with a smile.” Danilov laughed his last before falling dead to Winter’s hands outside.

    The survivors ate well and merry that evening. All except Velichko who wept.

    1. Charles Funk Avatar
      Charles Funk

      A/N: This story was inspired by the Nazino Affair in the Soviet Union where over 6,000 prisoners were deported to Nazino Island, Siberia in May 1933.
      Anarchy, Starvation, disease, exposure, and abuse from both guards and fellow prisoners wittled the numbers down to 2,200 in 13 weeks. The dead and those killed were cannibalized by the prisoners to survive.
      The Island was evacuated in July 1933. Reports and documents of the event was only rediscovered in 1994.

    2. I don’t understand the dice game, but an interesting story. It reminds me of the Donner party or that football team up in the Andes. But really, just think about the restaurant ideas, “Come to Comrades and eat me.” On second thought I’ll pass on the long pig. Fascinating read.

    3. I really enjoy this. I do understand the premise of the game, and I think knowing that it is inspired by real events gives the entire piece a chill that lends itself well. I also like that, this doesn’t play with the future or anything that is intangible. They all agree and are literally playing for who will be eaten.

    4. RainbowRayBubbles Avatar
      RainbowRayBubbles

      It certainly got my attention and I do find it very compelling. It’s a very simple premise and cleanly executed (if you don’t mind the pun 😉 ). I do like the emotion in it as well. You’ve done a great job. Hmmmm, the description of the game itself is a bit confusing, I had to read it a couple of times. But I do like how you used dialogue to move that part forward.

    5. Michael Case Avatar
      Michael Case

      What a creepy game, but I guess it’s no different than the basic need to rationalize the act of cannibalism during a need for survival. No different then choosing the longest hair to choose a victim for the groups benefit. Sadly, the scars left in the minds of the survivors are worse than the scars left on the bones on the eaten.

    6. I didn’t understand why Velichko volunteered. The stakes for losing were clear, but no idea what anyone got for winning, other than the game needed another player. I dont know why they didnt choose a second player the same way they chose the first. Velichko cries later, is it because he’s suicidal and thats why he wanted to play the game, or does he cry over the madness of the situation?

      “A crack appeared in Velichko’s stony demeanor.” This sentence could use more description, as it’s telling us, not showing.

      1. Charles Funk Avatar
        Charles Funk

        Hello Seidmadr Tales. I appreciate your curiosity and engagement to the story.
        Given the word count limit, it became a habit of mine to leave much to the enterpretation to the readers. Placing riddles and subtle hints between sentences as it entertains me to warch how the audience’s imagination flies to whatever sky appears ovee their heads.
        Would you like me to provide affirmation to your theories and answers to your questions?

  9. Astrid Jones Avatar
    Astrid Jones

    Fair in the Games of Men
    By Astrid Jones

    The man left the comfort of the tavern’s lanterns and began his trek down the rutted road. The full moon afforded him enough light to see by, even though it was late. Coins he would count again once he was home clinked against their companions in the pouch weighing down his belt. He patted the little leather sack, comforted by its presence.

    The town faded as he walked on, anxious to get his winnings home. He was making good time. Already the thick stand of yew marking the halfway point on his journey rose before him, the road disappearing into it. But he knew the way well and had no fear of the trees.

    Attention on his weighted purse, he did not see the lupine shadow step onto the path. Only when the creature growled did he realize his danger. Clear and bathed in yew-filtered moonlight only moments ago, the road was now hidden behind thick banks of smoke-like fog. Two burning red eyes fixed on his as the canid shadow took a step forward.

    “Dear Shuck, I mean no harm. I am simply going home,” he said, hoping his voice was calmer than he felt. Perhaps the beast would leave him be if he did not sound afraid.

    “No harm?” the Black Shuck growled, sparks spilling from its mouth. “You gamble with the lives of children as currency and say you mean no harm?”

    The man gripped his purse. “The game was fair,” he said hotly.

    Thick smoke swirled closer, bringing with it the hazy form of the Black Shuck. “I care not for what is fair in the games of men,” the creature snarled, more hot sparks flying from between its teeth. “You have traded the souls of children and therefore have forfeit your own.”

    Now solid, the Black Shuck leapt at him, bringing its swirling banks of smoke-like fog with it to roll over the man before he managed to take a breath to scream. It continued to stream down the road, leaving behind only a pouch of spilled coins glinting in a patch of moonlight.

    1. WolfsbaneX Avatar
      WolfsbaneX

      That got dark quick. Good job. I’m a sucker for lupine creatures and vigilante justice. Some of the wording was awkward (i.e. “Coins he would count again once he was home”). I understand you used that to show what he values, but I think Shuck’s accusation and his reaction did a fine job of that. Other than that, it’s solid work.

    2. Good story! You’ve crafted beautiful images of a fantasy-inspired land in the first couple of paragraphs, evoking a feeling of the start of an adventure. The middle, to me, evoked some sympathy towards the man, which made the end much harder-hitting when the Shuck speaks out. Finally, the description in the final paragraph is pretty dark and yet beautiful. I can see it translating well to visual media. Overall, great job!

    3. ClockworkPigeonz Avatar
      ClockworkPigeonz

      I liked the build up into the twist at the end, introducing the man first so that we have time to connect with him in some way- to fear for him with the tension that you’ve built with your world-building and imagery. Then showing us it’s not the creature in the woods that we should fear, rather it’s the greed of humans like the one we are shown. This has a very fairy-tale/ morality story feel to it that I absolutely love when paired with the darker twist- though to be fair most original fairy-tales are pretty dark. Loved it!

  10. The Oracle
    by NocteVesania

    The subject, Lucas Herrera, is a 35-year old male Las Vegas native. He declares his profession to be a broker, though background checks suggest the only deals he brokers are on blackjack tables. Despite the episodes of panic from recounting the incident, he appears to be of perfectly normal mental capacity. His account of the events, with some additional digging through police records and witness testimonies, is as follows:

    Mr. Herrera was spotted walking the infamous Strip at 11:37 PM. Eyewitnesses report he was particularly irate, mumbling some rather unpleasant things about casino dealers. Recounting the story, the subject mentions stumbling upon an decrepit fountain. Then, he goes on, babbling about some “Oracle”, an urban legend from the area.

    According to some denizens, the Oracle is a being able to bestow foresight, a tempting offer to gamblers for sure. Legends say the Oracle awaits offerings at an old fountain, the description of which matches the fountain the subject is said to have found. Mr. Herrera recalls his disbelief, even spitting into the fountain out of spite. “I’ve no respect for someone who can’t roll the dice,” he scoffs.

    All of a sudden, the subject reportedly blacked out, likely from blunt force head trauma. Coming to, he found himself in an alleyway with a splitting headache. He also noticed small objects digging into his palms. Upon inspection, he found that the objects were tiny dice, off-white like milk, roughly carved with crudely marked pips, and sticky to the touch from some kind of yellow fluid.

    The subject propped himself up on his knees, or at least he tried to. Unable to do so, he curled up to check his legs. I can only imagine the horror on his face when he finds nothing there from mid-thigh down. Local police later found him crawling out of the alley, screaming hysterically out of fear.

    Reading this report again, I can’t help but feel sick from such a cruel joke. In any case, this gives a whole new meaning to “oracle bones”.

    1. Like Magical Dragnet. In my mind, I could hear Joe Friday reading this. A hidden magical world acting as the seedy side of Las Vegas. That would make a good HBO or Netflix show. Although I would have a hard time believing this Herrera guy. He didn’t have a leg to stand on.

  11. Gregory Hess Avatar
    Gregory Hess

    “Prophecy Breaker” [Lily’s story, duplicated from private group]
    By Gregovin

    I walk up the stairs to the temple.

    Hasun The Guardian stands in front of the door.

    “Could you please allow me to pass? I’m kind of busy trying to save lives right now and really don’t want to deal with you.”

    “Lily. I can’t do that. The bones have dictated it so.”

    Hasun The Guardian’s twin brother, Dhakaal The Watcher, stands watch from the opposite side, arms crossed.

    “Come on,” I sigh.

    BAM

    Cha-Chink

    Oh come on, Edward. I was hoping to talk him down. Oh, well, I’ll forgive you this time.

    Hasun The Guardian falls to the ground, twitching. The runes tattooed on his skin unwind. He visibly shrinks.

    Dhakaal The Watcher yells, “What have you done? He was supposed to die in the Selksmire! He was supposed to fight the great flaming beast Trilumvarsil, according to the roll of the bones!”

    Edward responds, “I shot him with Lithium Tilganate powder.”

    “I was hoping to talk him down, but it seems a little too late for that,” Lily states.

    Dhakaal The Watcher screams, “Hexaaquairon(II) Tilganate? Anti mage powder? The effects of that stuff scale with power! He’ll probably be human for years! You broke a prophecy! Just who the hell are you?!”

    Edward responds instantly, “Just a mediocre magic user. Lily, it’s time to go.”

    I walk to the door.

    It opens easily.

    Inside lies our salvation. Our only hope. We must escape this world before it collapses.

    We find the pendant.

    IDENTIFY

    I know all there is to know about this artefact. I can now triangulate its origin, a location outside this world. This should do nicely.

    I portal away.

  12. VeryBoringName Avatar
    VeryBoringName

    Priests And Temples
    By: En

    Tlacotl and Tzacol stood under the Great Temple, sunrise as beautiful as ever. At the top of it, a priest was sacrificing Huitzilopochtli’s breakfast and another one was clearing yesterday’s dinner. The Priest threw off the body of Huitzilopochtli’s dinner, when he noticed two young boys looking excitedly over the corpse “What are you doing there!” He shouted to them, and the boys shouted back “We needed some dice for our game, can we take his knuckles?” After a bit of consideration, he shouted back “sure, go ahead”.

    Tzacol took hold of a wrist of the body while Tlacotl used a black sharp knife to cut out the knuckles. After some work,all the knuckles were in Tlacotl’s hand, “We should wash them” commented Tzacol, to which Tlacotl bursted laughing “The only thing we need is carve numbers in them.” Tzacol was shocked for a moment that his friend could write, but then he remembered that of course he could, he was going to become a priest once he grew up, and Tzacol could only hope to become a soldier.

    After a few minutes of carving by Tlacotl the dice were finally finished, “Finally, after so long, we can play” Tlacotl said, setting the last knuckle turned dice on the ground, Tzacol then stood up “I’ll grab the board” before disappearing in his house, and returning clutching a wooden board and several clay figurines. “Okay, we should wait for the others, I’ll be the Queatz. Have you created your character yet?” Tlacotl asked, to which Tzacol nodded enthusiastically “you helped me write his character sheet after all.”

    Atop the Great Temple, the two priests were deliberating “Why did you allow the boys to take the knuckles?” the priest asked, to which the second one replied “I recognized one of them as a student of my friend, besides, I’m hoping that Xochipilli will favor the boys for creating the game”. The other priest sighed “maybe, and who knows, maybe it will become popular”. He chuckled for a bit, then he decided to end the conversation “come, we have much to do”

    1. This is a fascinating view of two characters from what was a violent culture. It’s nice to read a story where the characters live in their time with the values of their time and not the modern values. Way too many people (not here) will create a character set in a violent culture like the Aztec, giving them 21st-century values. The two boys looking at the body, not thinking about what it represented but that they could make from it fit within a culture that would sacrifice tens of thousands a day.

      The only thing I could suggest, and this is just my opinion, and it could be wrong.

      Maybe separate the parts where different characters are talking.

      Excellent read.

  13. Calliope Rannis Avatar
    Calliope Rannis

    A Chance Mosaic
    By Calliope Rannis

    The crablike creature scuttled over to a series of trays, pulling one open to collect a metallic plate and a small dark container with their delicate four-fingered claws. Returning to the bartering table, the Explorer of Value placed the silver-grey circle of metal before their anxious customer. “This could be enough!” the alien’s translator buzzed from below their tendrilled mouth.

    Keyla gingerly took the offered container, hearing something like sand shift inside. “Soooooo…what exactly do you want me to do?”

    “Look inside!” The Explorer shook their claw at the cap sealing the top. She opened it easily, revealing lots of little beads piled inside. Exposed to light, they seemed to be all sorts of colours, patterns shifting and changing at the slightest movement. “This is Divining Dust,” said the merchant’s translator, taking on a dramatic flair, “where every particle is filled with a thousand colours. All perfectly balanced! Until-” The claw taps the plate. “They touch this, and a thousand colours become one – the colour that first touches the special metal shall become dominant.” The alien shifts closer. “And it is said that the resulting pattern reveals the destiny of its creator.”

    “How?” she scoffed.

    The Explorer gestured outwards in what may have been a shrug. “Why don’t we find out? Cast the dust upon the plate. But only once! Fate does not let us try our lives again, after all.”

    Keyla looked forlornly back on her pile on the table. A friend’s art portfolio, an old childhood stuffie, and her own patterned jacket. All to barter for an antique replacement part of her family’s past-it Solar Truck, and it still wasn’t enough. She didn’t even have any unheard stories to tell, or any local songs to sing. This divining dust “for additional bartering value” thing felt like the Explorer was pitying her.

    Still, she didn’t have anything to lose at this point. Keyla looked once more at the oil-slick colours of the beads. Then, in one quick movement, she flicked the dust out of the container, and let her long journey’s fate be decided by chaos and colour.

    1. In a kind of way, this reminds me of the idea of a self-fulfilling prophecy. Allowing an outside force to dictate fate rather than taking responsibility. But there’s this movie called Twelve Monkeys where the movie begins at the … Okay, no spoilers. It’s an interesting concept like mixing sci-fi with fantasy. This would be an interesting world to see. Excellent.

      1. Calliope Rannis Avatar
        Calliope Rannis

        I’m glad you enjoyed! 😀

    2. WolfsbaneX Avatar
      WolfsbaneX

      I really enjoy this take on the prompt, especially the use of abacomancy. Dust/dirt is not used often for divination in stories, and I wish people used it more. The barter aspect of the story is interesting, especially since it feels like Keyla is playing into his claws. Awesome work!

      1. Calliope Rannis Avatar
        Calliope Rannis

        I’m glad you liked the concept! I was thinking of a way to do weird sci-fi dice and dust which changes colour depending on which part of it touches the ground first was the result. And yeah the Explorer here is a highly skilled merchant – one of their race’s whole things is that they don’t use currency at all, hence their use of barter instead.

  14. MysteryElement Avatar
    MysteryElement

    Fateful Encounter
    By MysteryElement

    It had been a long day, Tamar’s feet hurt like hell, and having to walk home made his head swim. Pushing onward, the pain steadily increasing, his eyes caught a sign, barely visible under the dim street lights.“Dungeons and Flagons.” He had never noticed the pub, then again he didn’t notice most things on his ride home. It appeared to still be open. Thank the effing lord.

    Inside, reds and browns cast a cozy atmosphere. The walls were lined with books, games and figurines of fantastic creatures. Empty tables lead up to a bar where a woman stood cleaning bar glasses nonchalantly. She was possibly middle aged, back straight and shoulders pulled back, hair streaked with silver, she had the look of a woman who had gone through hell and came out stronger for it.

    “What will you have?” her tone was gentle but clipped.

    Looking over the draughts and placing an order, he examines his surroundings with interest, reminding him of Jo’s invitation to join their RPG group this weekend. He was still on the fence, not knowing the first thing about these games, but he liked Jo and thought spending time with their group might be fun. A glass of ale appeared on a coaster in front of him and, to his surprise, a set of cream colored dice. The bartender smiled.

    “You look like a man trying to sort things out.” she held out two of the dice

    “why not roll the dice, see what they say?”

    Cautiously testing their weight in his hand, he tossed them. Evens for yes, odds for no.

    Odds. He sighed, surprised at his dejection.

    “Disappointed?” she leaned over the bar.

    “A little.”

    “Then, ignore them.” She places the dice in a small satchel, handing it to him with a smile. “Sometimes, fate is about knowing what you want.”

    The young man walked away, feeling somewhat energized. Baba Yaga gazed after him with a sly smile.

    Another destiny served.

    The door closes with a soft click before the building stands, lifted by spindly legs, and walking off into the darkness.

    1. I had to look up that name (I’m not familiar with Slavic folklore), but this sounds like an interesting idea for a sort of TV series akin to The Outer Limits or Friday the 13th (the series). The pub’s name was good. It makes me wonder just what the dice really and how they will affect Tamar’s life. Excellent read.

    2. Michael Case Avatar
      Michael Case

      What a creative take on the old tales of happenstance and fate. Very modern-day version of a story from the Bhagavad Gita, or maybe one of the stories of the Buddha. The idea that by sure coincidence a person is given a life choice that they don’t understand at the time is always a great motif to skitch a story on. Very nice.

    3. Great story! I really love the tone of it as well as the humor. There’s just something really feel-goody about your interpretation of Baba Yaga and how she serves destiny in helping Tamar get into DnD. Love it!

      I noticed that once in the story you switched from past to present tense (he examines), but otherwise found nothing out of order. Good job!

  15. Child’s Play
    By Sandeen

    In a brightly lit room with far too many toys, a little boy named John whined, “What do you mean you took the last plague? I called dibs on that days ago. Now how am I supposed to explain all the death?”

    Abigail, the friend for hire, simply smiled. In a frightfully calm voice she intoned, “Well, if you had the mind for math, you wouldn’t have lost your people yesterday. And, if you understood the finer points of our colorful game, they would have died from old age anyways. Cancer comes in so many forms. Some are really relatively minor.”

    Between the two sat a colorful board, with dozens of playing pieces, and areas titled “Mars” and “Earth” and so on. Using material sourced from the creatures they represented, the pieces were vibrantly colored. And, what John didn’t realize, is that built into the game was a method of cheating the system. That was the true source of Abigail’s smile. The better-offs always thought they were smarter, and even better was when the child didn’t realize that he was playing with his own fate every time he moved his wealthy man back and forth.

    An early death today, a long life tomorrow. A victorious ending, a lonely life. Abigail had cheated from the beginning, taking her own representation and quickly playing it through the board to a long, successful life, then taking it out of the game.

    Only a fool would allow another fool to manipulate their life.

    “You know,” Abigail pointed out, “You may yet be able to save that species. You did destroy their planet, but you have a natural disaster sitting to the side there that could reset your world back a few hundred years.”

    John sighed, irritated and wishing, not for the first time, that his father had bought him a horse instead of giving him the family heirloom. It might be a one-of-a-kind strategy game, but on a horse he would be more likely to beat Abigail at least once.

    1. Is it wrong to feel sorry for John? Hiring someone to be a friend, not knowing they were cheating you. a Planets and Plagues game sounds interesting though it makes me wonder if it’s just a game. It’s an interesting dichotomy, with the employee being the manipulating force over the employer. I imagine it what it’s like to be Trump surrounded by “Yes-Men” who are too afraid to tell you what they really think while working to help themselves. Excellent.

  16. ClockworkPigeonz Avatar
    ClockworkPigeonz

    “Reforged”
    By: ClockworkPigeonz

    Ancient swordsmiths would’ve used bones from animals or their own ancestors to strengthen their swords.

    Cobalt knows better.

    Too much carbon and the sword will be brittle…too little and it will warp or bend under pressure. And while she’s never considered herself superstitious, there are some traditions a smith would be foolish to shirk.

    Another feather enters the forge-fire.

    Her forge smells as if its been used to cook rancid meat, rather than melt metal. She’d expected it with a blade this old- this tarnished with blood rust. The unique nature of this sword has made its’ Cleansing more of a gamble, though no Turned blade could ever be considered normal.

    But for a friend, it’s worth the risk.

    A good smith knows that a blade is an extension of a warrior. Their mind. Their soul. And while this blade had been gifted freely, it had been Turned against its’ original purpose. The weight of that guilt had nearly broken its’ wielder.

    Her fist clenches around the tongs as she draws the metal back out of the flames.

    There is no place for anger here…no trace of malice or violence must soak into the blade, or her work will be for nothing.

    She sits the sword back upon the anvil with a calm determination. Listens as the familiar reverberation of metal against metal sings up her arms telling her what the sword wants to be. What it has been. Adding to what her friend has revealed of his own story.

    She feeds white down and molted feathers to the forge. Casts one of her own in before the blade’s last pass through the cerulean inferno.

    Perhaps it will be enough to keep the blade from Turning again.

    Once finished, Cobalt inspects it- confidently drawing a finger against the sharpened edge.

    It refuses to bite its maker.

    She grins, tapping a finger against the blade to make it ring and breaking into laughter at what she hears.

    “Fatebreaker- so that’s your name?”

    In her hand the blade hums, content for the first time in many years.

    1. I like that this isn’t working with anyone else, but the sword that has Turned. I’d love to find out what made it turn. And the end, where it doesn’t bite its maker is a wonderful twist. The writing style is great, just wish that we would get to know a bit more of how Fatebreaker breaks fates.

    2. MysteryElement Avatar
      MysteryElement

      This very much has the feel of a creator with its creation, to give a piece of yourself and invest affection and care into a piece of work, not for your own sake but for the sake of the piece. It reminds me of when I first tried painting, investing not only color, but emotions and destiny into the piece and where it was going. I really loved this, good job.

    3. I feel like this story has a great rhythm to it, and for me at least there’s this sense of wonder in this creative process. Taking something that’s flawed (Turned) and refining (Cleansing) it into something greater is a wonderful thing, which I feel like you really captured here. I’m also a big fan of the more fantastical elements, which captivated me greatly. Great work on this!

  17. The Pitch
    By Mike Collins (Lakemoron)
    Fifteen people enter the ring. Each of them has their own set of dice. The winner gets one million dollars. Two people are chosen to roll against each other. The one with the highest role wins while the loser picks a card. The winner moves on to another role until only one contestant is left. The one with the lowest card is the day’s loser. At the end of each contest, the loser is ejected.

    The contestants are all housed together, sharing a space just big enough for the group. Each day they roll the dice in the morning. The people who roll evens get to eat while odds have them going hungry.

    ———————————————————

    A man said, “I don’t get it. I mean rolling dice… That won’t play well on television. There’s a reason why they play such colorful over the top games on Survivor.”

    Another man said, “Yeah… and reality shows are starting to falter in the ratings.”

    The first man said, “We could make the dice human size?”

    The network executive said, “I could see this working if we get some celebrities and make this a half-an-hour show. Maybe add something to this like a D&D contest.”

    The first man said, “Playing D&D with the stars. We could get Vin Diesel or that guy from True Blood, you know… The wolf guy.”

    The network executive said, “We could never get Vin Diesel or Joe Manganiello to live on an island and play for their food.”

    The second man said, “D&D games can take hours to play. We could tape one game and break it down into half-an-hour segments. I mean, most people will watch just to see their favorites play a game and talk.”

    George Heist watched as the network producer and his lackeys took his pitch and made it into something else. Somehow his show pitch, A Roll of the Bones, became Dungeons and Dragons with the Stars.

    The network executive asked, “So mister Heist, how soon can you get into production?”

    An intern spoke up, “You know they already tried that on YouTube.”

    1. Okay, I may mostly enjoy this because there is currently a thing on Omaze to go play DnD with Joe Manganiello. Well done playing with things currently going on.

      1. Thank you. This was a hard one for me. Its premise is definitely outside my comfort zone. I found a way to make it something else but, I’m not happy with the result. It was this or a story about Divining Bones.

    2. VeryBoringName Avatar
      VeryBoringName

      I really like the story, it’s funny to envision actors and celebrities just playing DnD, it’s even funnier when such a thing is supposed to go on the television, but the story is tragic for George, at first having his concept warped beyond all recognition, and then having it shot down by someone all together, I think there’s a deeper meaning even if I can’t see it.

      1. Thank you. Both actors are known to be fans of DnD with Manganiello saying on a podcast how he has tried to get a hold of Diesel to play a game.

  18. No Low Stakes Allowed
    By T.E.

    El Casino Mortale. Jim slammed the car door and inhaled they dry desert air. How long had it been? He could barely remember, but it sure felt good to be back.

    A gaunt woman with thinning hair manned the front desk. “Welcome, would you like… “ her voice trailed off and her head slumped down to the desk.

    “Hey, wakey, wakey,” Jim snapped his fingers. “I’d like a tour please.”

    “Huh?” she raised her head and gasped, revealing her rotting teeth. “Oh, a tour. Come with me.”

    The first room contained rows upon rows of slot machines. Skeleton-like men pulled the levers synced to some imperceptible rhythm.

    “So what’s up with this room?” Jim asked.

    “Here visitors can extend their natural life.”

    “And what do they pay?”

    “The stake is one year. With quite decent odds really.”

    One of the machines lit up for a second and the man glued to it yelled “Jackpot!” in a state of absolute glee. Color returned to his cheeks and he looked at the two newcomers with gleaming eyes. He smiled at them. A warm happy smile. Then he returned his attention to the machine.

    “The house always wins in the end I presume?” Jim asked.

    “Umm… Well of course it does.”

    The tour went on. He was led through an endless succession of rooms, all filled with gamblers in various states of decay. Some wagered happiness, some love, at the real high stake tables they gambled with the fate of the world itself. One particular man in an excellent suit broke down crying after a gamble resulted in genocide.

    “I think I’ve seen enough,” Jim stopped his guide. “I don’t think I caught your name?”

    She shrugged. “Gambled it away back in the day.”

    “I’ll have a look at it later then. Would you care to lead me to the vaults?”

    “Excuse me? That’s off-limits, besides I don’t have the key.”

    “Oh but I do,” Jim smiled, showing off his sharp teeth. “You see, I’m here to collect.”

    1. Madelyn Avatar
      Madelyn

      Man, I love casino aesthetics and supernatural overlay with things we find in the real world. This is a genuinely cool story! I haven’t played through it myself, but the piece has similar vibes to the game Grim Fandango. I assume Jim is the boss of the casino or a close associate to the boss that came to see how things were going at the casino? Keep up the good work!

      1. Thanks! I haven’t played Grim Fandango either, but I’ve heard good things about it and I really like it’s aesthetic as far as I’ve seen. I’m glad for the comparison.

    2. That ending was seriously bone-chilling. The entire time in the story I thought that Jim was just some guest in the casino, when in truth it seems like he is either in charge or maybe even someone who came to rob and threaten that establishment (that second part is just a theory of my own). Even so, you create an atmosphere of genuine innocence around Jim only to then reveal that he is in fact not at all harmless. Great story!

      1. Good to hear the ending worked out! I was wondering if perhaps there was to little build-up and if it would’ve needed more words. It’s also always fun to hear different takes on it. Thanks for the kind words!

    3. I absolutely loved this piece. I think maybe because, and I definitely might be wrong here, but this gives me the same kind of supernatural vibes that Hotel California has. One of the best things in here is how you describe the setting as well as the characters. This definitely isn’t a place I want to be, but I want to know more about Jim.

      1. Thanks a lot! That’s definitely the type of vibe I was going for. It’s also good to hear that Jim was an interesting character.

    4. Astrid Jones Avatar
      Astrid Jones

      Oooo, I don’t know what type of creature Jim is, but I like him. My interest is piqued and now I want to know more. I really liked how you showed both the results of a win and a loss in this world. Do the casino goers over get to leave, I wonder? Or are they trapped there? If not by their own vices, then perhaps because they’ve already gambled something like their name or their soul away?

      1. I was thinking along the lines of regular gambling. They could leave if they really wanted to, but addiction made them come back and lose more. But of course, feel free to interpret it however you want to. I’m glad I piqued your interest in this world with this short piece. Thank you!

  19. Joseph Kharms Avatar
    Joseph Kharms

    “Existence Precedes Essence”
    By Joe Kharms

    To write the story you are about to read, I played a sort of game myself. I, your gracious author, decided to play with life and death itself; so that I could write the best and most accurate story for all of you.

    I once heard a teenager exclaim into the air “my life has been ruined!” after she had been kicked out of her netball team. So, naturally, as your heroic author I decided to get kicked from a netball team as well; in order to test whether it would ruin my life.

    I am a male so, naturally, I struggled to get into my local netball team which was an all-girls team. After being denied entry as a man I came dressed in the disguise of a woman; I was a very sexy woman I must say.

    Once I was in the team, during my first match, I stripped naked in the middle of the pitch and proclaimed: “I am a man! Kick me out of your netball team!”

    Although I didn’t officially get kicked out of the team, the police made it very clear I wouldn’t be able to go near a game of netball ever again.
    Over the next few months, news got around that I had stripped naked at a netball match. Which led to me getting fired from my job and my wife leaving me.

    Within a year, I was sleeping on the streets and drinking wine straight from the bottle. It was in this moment I exclaimed into the air “my life has been ruined!”

    And that’s the process that led me to write this story:

    CHARLIE WAS A DOG.
    CHARLIE DIDN’T LIKE BONES, HE MUCH PREFERRED MILK.
    CHARLIE MUST ACTUALLY BE A CAT.

    1. Jen (bookwolf) Avatar
      Jen (bookwolf)

      I love the ridiculousness of this piece. The logic part of my brain, however, really wants the story the narrator has written at the end to tie in with the actual narrative better. But I understand that this piece is supposed to be ridiculous (at least, that’s what I’m getting out of this) so the fact that the narrator’s story doesn’t really mesh actually works quite well.

      1. Joseph Kharms Avatar
        Joseph Kharms

        Thank you. I believe life is inherently absurd. And although life has no meaning or purpose that doesn’t mean it isn’t a good thing. The lack of meaning in our lives actually makes things more fun. And that’s what I aim to present in my writing. I always to wish to show that we are born to find an essence not born with an essence.

  20. Casino Necro
    By Alex Nightingale

    Despite being a reaper, Felix was woefully out of his depth. He had rarely been down to Earth, or any planet with sentient life. He was someone who took care of the souls, once they reached the afterlife. It was, what he was good at.

    But what could he do. There weren’t many of them left and they had to be versatile.

    It took him a while to find, what he was looking for. A dark alleyway, wedged between two high-rise buildings, shielded a single small table from view. A woman, dressed in black, was sitting behind it. He made his way towards her, one hand resting on his concealed sickle. He quickly withdrew and placed has hand into his pocket instead. The woman smiled at him.

    “Welcome”, she said: “To my little game. Roll well and you can live another lifetime. Roll badly and, well, I’d better not say.”

    She indicated the board on her table, covered in pieces and dice made of bone. Felix, however, was more interested in the bag to the woman’s feet. It was made of thick leather and leaked a scent, with which he was alto familiar.

    She gambled with souls.

    He reached out his hand and took one of the dice. The bone tingled in his hand, like it was alive. The woman frowned, but quickly regained her posture.

    “First, pay the pot”, the woman said: “A soul for a soul.”

    “How does this game work?” Felix asked innocently.

    “That”, the woman was frowning again: “Is none of your concern. Trust that it will work.”

    The table began to shake, as Felix couldn’t hold his anger back any longer.

    “What gives you the right to…?”

    He broke off, as a sharp pain erupted in his side. He was thrown to the side and landed hard on the floor. He had never felt pain before, at least not like this. The scampering of feet told him that the woman had fled. Contrary to popular belief, reapers could die. And he had no idea what would happen, if he did.

    1. Joseph Kharms Avatar
      Joseph Kharms

      I like to think the game is a metaphor for life. And that when it comes to existence we just have to “Trust that it will work.”
      I really liked the line “Trust that it will work.” I think it perfectly sums up the condition of existing perfectly – maybe I’m just looking too much into it. Either way, great story!

      1. Thank you! It is certainly an exciting way to think about the game.

    2. Madelyn Avatar
      Madelyn

      This was pretty good, Alex! While Felix’s reason for being on Earth isn’t outright stated here, you gave enough information for readers to assume that this woman was interfering with something that should be left alone—souls in this case. I really hope Felix doesn’t die; I was just starting to like him.

      1. Thank you, Madelyn! There was a much more detailed description of Felix in the original draft, but I had to cut it, due to the word limit. I’m glad his character got at least somewhat across regardless.

    3. MysteryElement Avatar
      MysteryElement

      I really enjoyed this one. I will admit some of the comma placement confused me. like “It was, what he was good at” or “It took him a while to find, what he was looking for”. It made the pacing feel a bit fractured to me. Otherwise, a very enjoyable read.

      1. Thank you for the feedback! I’ll keep it in mind.

  21. Madelyn Avatar
    Madelyn

    “The Long Night”
    By Madelyn

    Balthazar tossed the bag of bones into the fireplace. Even as his eyes protested, he found no willpower to blink as the bag squirmed. If he had just been a few seconds faster, maybe he would have a better idea of what brought the vampires to the area.

    “Balthazar?”

    He could not bother to look at Avi. “Is Jason alright?”

    “He’s shaken up, but aside from a few scrapes and a sudden haircut, he’s fine.”

    Balthazar rubbed his eyes and winced at how dry they were. “I should have noticed sooner.”

    “Vampires are difficult to find,” Avi reasoned, “and it only got worse with modern changes. The fact that you two survived is a miracle.”

    Balthazar lowered his hand and traced the scars on his right arm. “I suppose.”

    He heard Avi’s footsteps, then felt two hands on his shoulders. “Is everything okay?”

    “Of course.”

    “Balthazar.”

    “It’s just been a long night, that’s all.” He made eye contact with Avi and smiled. “Given the current problem, I suppose it’s going to be longer for me.”

    He leaned forward slightly, but Avi guided Balthazar to the couch, “You’re going to sleep. I’ll get started on the background information.”

    Balthazar could not find the energy to argue with him. Instead, he found himself resting his head on the armrest and dangling one leg off of the couch.

    “You…”

    “Don’t worry, Balthazar. I won’t stay up too long.”

    Avi muttered something else to himself as he brushed some of Balthazar’s hair from his face. When he was out of sight, Balthazar hid his face in one hand.

    “Idiot.” His hand muffled his voice. “You don’t try to kiss someone when they’re worried.” He realized what he said and groaned. “I haven’t told him yet.”

    Balthazar slowly lowered his hand and closed his eyes. Even as the bones continued clattering in the fireplace, he managed to fall asleep with that realization in his head. There would be time to confess when they handled the vampires.

    1. The tone of this story is great. Even though the lead-up to this event is not known, I could really feel how difficult it was for Balthazar. You really conveyed his despair and concern for Avi and Jason.
      Only one small thing. In the second line, I feel like there is a word missing. Instead of ‘if he just a few seconds faster’, maybe it should be ‘if he had just been a few seconds faster’? That is really the only criticism I have, though.
      Although Balthazar is a recurring character in your stories, I feel like his emotional state and his character comes across well here. I also liked the take on the prompt, implying an execution, rather than a gamble or a game.

      1. Madelyn Avatar
        Madelyn

        Thank you for the input! Admittedly, I finished writing this at around 1:30 AM, so there was bound to be some mistakes. I’ll fix that after this reply for future readers.
        Balthazar is pretty personal for me when it comes to emotions, especially in the past week or so. It’s good that I was able to carry that into this piece.

    2. ClockworkPigeonz Avatar
      ClockworkPigeonz

      Since my own stories tend to lean more on imagery to create scenes, I really enjoy the way you use dialogue to move the story forward! You’re very confident with this element of writing and it shows because the characters’ dialogue hits that balance between expressing enough information while not overloading the reader. I only notice a few things about this that could change. Mainly just little instances of word economy “could have” being used instead of “could’ve”- but those sorts of things could just depend on your own writing style/voice.

      1. Madelyn Avatar
        Madelyn

        Thank you for the input! I always worry about my use of dialogue for plot movement since it is so easy to fall into exposition valley with that method, so it’s good to know I avoided it here. As for the minor things, I think it was out of my worry of the word count; if I rewrite this without the word limit, I would pay closer attention to things like that.

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